So I am currently planning the page layouts for my
RSOM9 comic.
I can't believe
I had all day yet
all I was able to roughly do are the layouts for the
first and last 3 pages.
The last 3 pages (18-20) will pretty much remain the same (hopefully) as I go through the layouts of the entire comic.
But I'm just sooooo
stuck on the first 3 pages.
It will probably give me nightmares tonight If I fail to come up with a solution.
My main problem is trying to compress the "
intro" portion of the script
within 3 pages.
As much as possible, I don't want to extend the intro to 5 pages as I want to give the middle portion a lot of real estate.
Especially because I'm seeing the ending portion as 5 pages long.
It was a tough decision to not include
establishing shots of the setting in the intro.
I left shots of the main character's "room" to the ending where they have symbolic significance (sorta).
The challenge in the intro is that I wanted the shots of the main character to cut in back and forth with shots of another scene involving
another character whom he will encounter by the end of the intro scene (that is.... page 3).
Surprisingly enough, I'm not having the "
crowded artwork" problem so far (one of the main complaints in
Soda Pop).
However, looking at the
thumbnails, the narration, which would be part of the layout, seems to be
competing for space.
This problem became obvious when I actually couldn't fit the
title logo at all on the 3rd page as I planned.
From the looks of it, I might actually
redraw the first 2 pages to make the 3rd page the title page as it should be.
After this,
12 PAGE FIGHT SCENE!
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